Monday, 15 October 2012

Shorter version of the Coffee shop script


Jessie enters the coffee shop to meet Florence.

JESSIE
Hey.

FLORENCE
(Nervously laughs)
Hi, it’s been a long time since we’ve hanged out right!


(Camera pans until Jessie reachers her seat. Using the 180 degree rule, we follow behind Florence's left shoulder)

JESSIE
(Shrugs and goes to sit down at the table opposite Florence)
Since you and Rob got together we stopped hanging out.

FLORENCE
Listen, Jessie I’m sorry about how I’ve handled things between us. I hope we can be like we were before all of that.

JESSIE
(Sarcastically laughs)
That’s only because you and Rob broke up!

(Using the 180 degree rule, we follow behind Jessie’s right shoulder)

(Waitress enters the scene and walks up to their table)

(Camera immediately looks up at the waitress. A high angle shot is used so we see all characters present in the scene)



END OF SCENE


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